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Yeah, thass the problem, right there. Here's what Libor said: " ... I just wanted to save you baby!!! "

One never knows>>>Really.

Who were you trying to save again? Tell me again?

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But at the same time, this is great. I fell like this is going into some new areas for you as a writer. Yeah, it takes a little patience in me for me to plow through all of this and I still don't know what everything means (sorry - "duda"? huh?) but overall this one held up to my sckrootiny. Nice work. Coming along. So. I say BOTH things. Both the "obvious" observation above AND I want to encourage you as this shows real progress and you are almost saying it yourself, just what I "already said." Let's see where you go with it my little he-man. (Of course that is MY wish for my own reading and nothing to do with you at all ~)

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